Loic and Mark
We are in France. It was a cold and dark night. Mark was running fast from the police officer on a roof. The police officer was trying to catch him because he got into the country with illegal ways, but Mark was a very good runner, but in the last moment he fell to the ground from the roof and he founded a little bread shop.
He went into it really wet and he got hide as soon as he could. Then he saw a person, he had black hair , dark eyes and a funny moustache ,this was the first time when he saw Loic. Mark was afraid because he thought that he was going to tell the policeman about he was there, but instead Loic helped him with that. Mark was really hungry and wet and he didn’t know what was going to happen next. ”Hi , do you think my dog is pretty?” Loic said. Loic saw on Mark’s confused face and said:” I have been thinking about that very long.” There was a awkward silence… ”Can I borrow your clothes? , I’m really wet”. Loic turned surprised too.
Then the door was opening by the policeman. Mark got hide again. The policeman said: ”Have you seen a bad guy with red hair. He is very fast and wet”. The policeman was really breathless. Then Loic said:” No, I didn’t but, do you think my dog is pretty?” ” What are you talking about?! I have a really big problem and you are talking about your dog , what’s wrong with you?” Then the policeman took a look around the shop. ” You didn’t answer to my question, so you have to leave now. Here is nothing” , Loic said. ”OK , calm down poor man , if I didn’t answer your question is because I didn’t saw your dog.” Then Loic took a look but he didn’t see his dog anywhere. Then Loic said:” But there’s a picture, so now you have to answer my question!” The policeman sighed and went in front of door. ”I won’t come back ever!!” And then he just left. ”Ok , now you can appear”. Mark went out of the counter and said: „You are really crazy but , I don’t know your name yet, can you tell me. Loic laughed and said: ”Of course , but just if you answer me. So, do you need also underwear’s?”. Mark was very surprised .”Of course I need them , are you an idiot or what?”. Door opened again but this time it was a dog with a bone in its mouth and a new guest. ”Hi, I need some bread , am i at the right place?” ”Sorry Mark , now I have to go and I’ll come back and you will have to tell me if you need underwear’s and I want to know where are you come from!” Then Loic went away. Mark was scared, he didn´t want to tell about himself because he is an illegal person. So , Mark thought that is better to leave and find some new place to be. Then Mark just left. It was raining. He didn’t have a place where he could be or not even a place where he can warm up because there was too late night. He was really hopeless and he didn’t know what he was going to do.
Mark saw nothing because was midnight and there wasn’t moon. He was really tired of that day. He wanted just rest little and he sat street’s corner. He put his head on knees and closed his eyes. ZZZZzzzzZZZZZZZZZ…
He woke up when someone poked his shoulder. “Are you okay?” said woman who had blond hair. Mark wondered what is going on but then he remembered. “Oh, yes I’m but what time is it?” Woman took phone from her pocket and show that for Mark. “I have slept only five hours… But what?! It’s Sunday?? How that’s possible??” “That’s right , it’s Sunday, why?” Mark started running and said: “I have slept one day!”
He came in front of the bread shop and took a breather. He tried to open the door but it didn’t open. He knocked the door and looked through the glass door. There was dark and nothing moved. Mark went behind the house and looked there too through the window. He saw that Loic was sleeping on the bed and he tried to get Loic’s attention and knocked on the window and screamed. Nothing happened. Then he noticed that next to him was an open window. He went through the window inside and went to knocked Mark’s door.
When Mark came inside Loic’s room. Loic get up and said: ” Well, do you need underwear or not and where are you from?” “I don´t want to tell you” Said Mark. Then Loic said “Well, if you don’t want to tell me I can talk with the police officer and ask him where are you from.”” No!! Ok, I can tell you but you have to calm down, all right?” Said Mark. “Yes but I need a fast answer or I’ll call the policeman.”
Then Mark started to tell his story
”I have a dream from I was 10 years old. I waited for 6 years to make my dream come true, even my parents gave me money for the trip. I couldn’t believe it because I was too young and my parents have money only for my trip. Then I chose the first place, it was going to be Spain. But guess what? I took the wrong plane to France and now the police think that I’m an illegal person and I’m not!! I don’t know what I’ll do… I didn’t want to tell you this because is a really, really stupid thing.
I have relatives at Spain and I don’t have a phone that I can use to tell to them that I won’t come. Everything what I had, I had to left behind, money, clothes, tooth-brash and I really will need that!! So, I’m lost with my life. Do you want to help me to getting up from the bottom?” Then Loic watch him and said ” Sorry, can you repeat please? “Then after five times that Mark explained his story to Loic at the end he could understand it and he said: “You are really stupid then. Lose your fly, how can you be so stupid?” Mark was just staring at Loic. He said nothing. Then Loic said: “But okey, I can help you. First you have to find some job.” Mark was smiling. “Oh yeah!!” Then he hugged Loic. “Maybe I will get job at here?” Loic facial expression was really serious. Then he smiled and said: “Okay, okay you got the place here!” “Really, thanks!!” said Mark and kissed Loic to his cheek. “Calm down and get off to me!!” Loic said.
Then Mark got some money and get his life back. They deal things with police and everything is fine now. There is only one thing what Mark wants. Get his own house in Spain, that is his dream.
Collaborative writing by: Martina og Hanna.
He went into it really wet and he got hide as soon as he could. Then he saw a person, he had black hair , dark eyes and a funny moustache ,this was the first time when he saw Loic. Mark was afraid because he thought that he was going to tell the policeman about he was there, but instead Loic helped him with that. Mark was really hungry and wet and he didn’t know what was going to happen next. ”Hi , do you think my dog is pretty?” Loic said. Loic saw on Mark’s confused face and said:” I have been thinking about that very long.” There was a awkward silence… ”Can I borrow your clothes? , I’m really wet”. Loic turned surprised too.
Then the door was opening by the policeman. Mark got hide again. The policeman said: ”Have you seen a bad guy with red hair. He is very fast and wet”. The policeman was really breathless. Then Loic said:” No, I didn’t but, do you think my dog is pretty?” ” What are you talking about?! I have a really big problem and you are talking about your dog , what’s wrong with you?” Then the policeman took a look around the shop. ” You didn’t answer to my question, so you have to leave now. Here is nothing” , Loic said. ”OK , calm down poor man , if I didn’t answer your question is because I didn’t saw your dog.” Then Loic took a look but he didn’t see his dog anywhere. Then Loic said:” But there’s a picture, so now you have to answer my question!” The policeman sighed and went in front of door. ”I won’t come back ever!!” And then he just left. ”Ok , now you can appear”. Mark went out of the counter and said: „You are really crazy but , I don’t know your name yet, can you tell me. Loic laughed and said: ”Of course , but just if you answer me. So, do you need also underwear’s?”. Mark was very surprised .”Of course I need them , are you an idiot or what?”. Door opened again but this time it was a dog with a bone in its mouth and a new guest. ”Hi, I need some bread , am i at the right place?” ”Sorry Mark , now I have to go and I’ll come back and you will have to tell me if you need underwear’s and I want to know where are you come from!” Then Loic went away. Mark was scared, he didn´t want to tell about himself because he is an illegal person. So , Mark thought that is better to leave and find some new place to be. Then Mark just left. It was raining. He didn’t have a place where he could be or not even a place where he can warm up because there was too late night. He was really hopeless and he didn’t know what he was going to do.
Mark saw nothing because was midnight and there wasn’t moon. He was really tired of that day. He wanted just rest little and he sat street’s corner. He put his head on knees and closed his eyes. ZZZZzzzzZZZZZZZZZ…
He woke up when someone poked his shoulder. “Are you okay?” said woman who had blond hair. Mark wondered what is going on but then he remembered. “Oh, yes I’m but what time is it?” Woman took phone from her pocket and show that for Mark. “I have slept only five hours… But what?! It’s Sunday?? How that’s possible??” “That’s right , it’s Sunday, why?” Mark started running and said: “I have slept one day!”
He came in front of the bread shop and took a breather. He tried to open the door but it didn’t open. He knocked the door and looked through the glass door. There was dark and nothing moved. Mark went behind the house and looked there too through the window. He saw that Loic was sleeping on the bed and he tried to get Loic’s attention and knocked on the window and screamed. Nothing happened. Then he noticed that next to him was an open window. He went through the window inside and went to knocked Mark’s door.
When Mark came inside Loic’s room. Loic get up and said: ” Well, do you need underwear or not and where are you from?” “I don´t want to tell you” Said Mark. Then Loic said “Well, if you don’t want to tell me I can talk with the police officer and ask him where are you from.”” No!! Ok, I can tell you but you have to calm down, all right?” Said Mark. “Yes but I need a fast answer or I’ll call the policeman.”
Then Mark started to tell his story
”I have a dream from I was 10 years old. I waited for 6 years to make my dream come true, even my parents gave me money for the trip. I couldn’t believe it because I was too young and my parents have money only for my trip. Then I chose the first place, it was going to be Spain. But guess what? I took the wrong plane to France and now the police think that I’m an illegal person and I’m not!! I don’t know what I’ll do… I didn’t want to tell you this because is a really, really stupid thing.
I have relatives at Spain and I don’t have a phone that I can use to tell to them that I won’t come. Everything what I had, I had to left behind, money, clothes, tooth-brash and I really will need that!! So, I’m lost with my life. Do you want to help me to getting up from the bottom?” Then Loic watch him and said ” Sorry, can you repeat please? “Then after five times that Mark explained his story to Loic at the end he could understand it and he said: “You are really stupid then. Lose your fly, how can you be so stupid?” Mark was just staring at Loic. He said nothing. Then Loic said: “But okey, I can help you. First you have to find some job.” Mark was smiling. “Oh yeah!!” Then he hugged Loic. “Maybe I will get job at here?” Loic facial expression was really serious. Then he smiled and said: “Okay, okay you got the place here!” “Really, thanks!!” said Mark and kissed Loic to his cheek. “Calm down and get off to me!!” Loic said.
Then Mark got some money and get his life back. They deal things with police and everything is fine now. There is only one thing what Mark wants. Get his own house in Spain, that is his dream.
Collaborative writing by: Martina og Hanna.